what is the difference between meaning and actual meaning
none
so why say actual
we're in her head
you don't have to say her name
you said he had no passion in the first paragraph
maybe a different word
this should really be integrated with the other time you say it
oh never mind leave it
I'd get rid of the single quotes
too fussy especially in dialogue
sometimes instead italics
"spit out a mouthful of lunch onto her plate"
ick
like is better than such as
it never hurts to be clear
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