Thursday, May 14, 2020

Editing Notes

what is the difference between meaning and actual meaning
none
so why say actual

we're in her head
you don't have to say her name

you said he had no passion in the first paragraph
maybe a different word

this should really be integrated with the other time you say it
oh never mind leave it

I'd get rid of the single quotes
too fussy especially in dialogue
sometimes instead italics

"spit out a mouthful of lunch onto her plate"
ick

like is better than such as

it never hurts to be clear

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